Structure-wise, at least.
Two options for a title, here. We have "Reconciliation" or "The Healing Sacrament". I'm more tempted by the first, since all the four sub-sections are one word-ers. The second does sound slightly more Catholic, which is the basis for the whole titling and organization of the piece -- because I get silly and obsessive about my fanfiction XD -- but even so. The terms are apparently pretty interchangeable, as far as I can tell from Wikipedia.
the Sin chapter should also maybe have it's title changed to "contrition". Granted, I can't exactly say that any Master would ever feel GUILTY for his sins, but... apparently contrition is the main first step in the whole confession-absolution process. So we'll see. It probably will change from "sin" though. >>
...and yes I wrote up a post just for notes. rawr. <3
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